Endangered animals!

As part of our High View Cares topic, we have been learning about endangered animals.
We have been reading a book called 'When the Mountains Roared' by Jess Butterworth. The introduction of the book uses great suspense to hook the reader in and we couldn't wait to find out what happened. We used the suspense features in our own writing to write our own version of an introduction to the story.
Can you spot our short sentences, rhetorical questions and use of emotions?